A) "While the world unravels, Cormac Travels."
B) "The question asked on both sides of The Pond, 'is Cormac a "gourmet" or a "gourmand?"
C) "You can't spell 'cormorant' macaroni sculpture without "c-o-r-m-a-c," but why would you want to spell 'cormorant macaroni sculpture, anyway?"
D) "Cormac Travels and I didn't even get a lousy T-shirt."
E) "Cormac used to be young, fun and in no need of Tums. Now he's old, sick and he carries a box of Pocky sticks."
F) Or, do I stay with "I travel, I eat and you get your daily serving of ellipses. What could be better?"
14 comments:
I like the first one. Failing that, stick with the existing.
I'm with Bubs, but I might put a "the" in there...While the world unravels, Cormac Travels. Unless that would interfere with your meter.
Bubs,
Thanks.
Flannery,
Yikes, typo! This what I get for posting while I'm answering my email, thank you very much for pointing that out!
I agree. The first one! I like it.
Chris,
Thanks, but please click the poll on right ; )
I voted, but you could also make a new slogan with that Pocky thing...
Tanya,
Ah, I knew that someone would appreciate the humor in that one and I'm glad it's you.
"B", certainment.
It has a certain Continental flair to it.
Mon Baroness,
Mais oui.
I like A.
Eve,
Welcome and it looks like "A" will overwhelming win.
I love pocky sticks nom-nom-nom
JDC
I too voted for #1. taglines should always be short and pithy - ot so say we.
And you can always reverse that one.
While the world travels, Cormac unravels.
you could also be like A-Rod and take to calling yourself C-Mac
Editor JDC,
Wow, a Johnny Dollars sighting! That must mean that Astonishing Adventures Magazine Issue #5 is close to being ready...or that we're going to have an additional two weeks of winter.
Gifted,
Short is good, it makes more memorable.
"And you can always reverse that one. While the world travels, Cormac unravels."
That's truer as of late, though I won't call myself "C-Mac" as it sounds to close to "Crack."
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